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《渡口》大纲与剧本

对照实际输入、结构化输出和质量检查,理解这一阶段怎样连接上下游。

6集
9场
123句对白
652.1s预估总时长
冷开场

先看见她抱箱奔跑

第 1 拍直接兑现皮箱钩子,每句对白独立记录说话人、文字和语气。

确定性检查

10 道质量门通过

时长、对白长度、动作节拍、钩子、悬念、角色与场景引用均已对账。

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{
  "source": "渡口",
  "episodes": [
    {
      "ep": 1,
      "targetSeconds": 120,
      "hook": "皮箱里到底装了什么,值得她指节发白",
      "cliff": "陆行远的右手从上船起就没离开过大衣口袋",
      "beatsClaimed": [
        "悬念钩"
      ],
      "scenes": [
        {
          "sceneId": "S02",
          "lighting": "浓雾清晨",
          "characters": [
            "C01",
            "C03",
            "C04"
          ],
          "props": [
            "P01"
          ],
          "flow": [
            {
              "action": "冷开场:一个年轻女人抱着旧皮箱,在雾里的河岸土路上跑,鞋底踏得水洼直响,箱子搂得死紧。雾把她的背影吞掉。"
            },
            {
              "action": "跑到头,雾里才露出栈桥,只剩三步能见。老周把篙靠在船帮上,蹲在船头吧嗒旱烟,梆子声闷得像隔了层棉絮。"
            },
            {
              "speaker": "C03",
              "line": "上船喽——过河的抓紧,雾要变天。",
              "delivery": "扯着嗓子,不急不躁"
            },
            {
              "action": "跳板尽头传来担子的响动,胡二爷挑着货担赶上来,嗓门比人先到。"
            },
            {
              "speaker": "C04",
              "line": "等等二爷我!这雾天赶船,命都得跑掉半条。",
              "delivery": "气喘吁吁,自来熟"
            },
            {
              "action": "胡二爷挑着担子上船,老周搭手帮他把担子卸进舱里。"
            },
            {
              "speaker": "C03",
              "line": "胡二爷,你这担子比人金贵。",
              "delivery": "旱烟不离嘴"
            },
            {
              "speaker": "C04",
              "line": "那可不——吃饭的家伙,比命金贵。",
              "delivery": "拍着担子笑"
            },
            {
              "action": "沈知微最后一个踏上跳板。旧皮箱抱在怀里,指节因为用力而发白。"
            },
            {
              "speaker": "C03",
              "line": "箱子沉就搁船头,掉河里我可不捞。",
              "delivery": "眼皮都没抬"
            },
            {
              "speaker": "C01",
              "line": "不劳烦。它跟我。",
              "delivery": "声音很轻,却没商量"
            },
            {
              "action": "老周看了她一眼,没说话。他收了跳板,撑篙离岸,栈桥缩回雾里。"
            },
            {
              "speaker": "C03",
              "line": "坐稳——开船。",
              "delivery": "篙一点岸"
            }
          ]
        },
        {
          "sceneId": "S01",
          "lighting": "晨雾",
          "characters": [
            "C01",
            "C02",
            "C03",
            "C04"
          ],
          "props": [
            "P01"
          ],
          "flow": [
            {
              "action": "舱里坐着两个人。胡二爷的货担占了半条长凳,陆行远靠着舱壁,右手揣在大衣口袋里没动过。"
            },
            {
              "speaker": "C04",
              "line": "姑娘头回走这条水路吧?我一看一个准。",
              "delivery": "自来熟地凑近"
            },
            {
              "action": "沈知微拣了离所有人最远的角落坐下,皮箱搁在膝上,双臂环着。"
            },
            {
              "speaker": "C04",
              "line": "城里亲戚接站,还是投店?二爷我熟门熟路。",
              "delivery": "追着问"
            },
            {
              "speaker": "C01",
              "line": "借过就好,不敢劳动。",
              "delivery": "不抬眼"
            },
            {
              "speaker": "C04",
              "line": "嗨,出门在外别客气——箱子给我,搁上头稳当。",
              "delivery": "笑着,手已经伸向皮箱"
            },
            {
              "action": "沈知微一把按住箱盖,动作快得吓人。"
            },
            {
              "action": "满舱的闲谈声戛然而止。胡二爷的手停在半空,笑僵在脸上。"
            },
            {
              "speaker": "C03",
              "line": "船上有个规矩——不问来路,不碰行李。",
              "delivery": "从船头传来,不紧不慢"
            },
            {
              "speaker": "C04",
              "line": "是是,二爷我多嘴,多嘴。",
              "delivery": "讪讪收手"
            },
            {
              "action": "船行河心,雾贴着水皮走。胡二爷东张西望,眼睛老往皮箱上瞟。"
            },
            {
              "speaker": "C04",
              "line": "老周,今儿这雾邪性,走得完吗?",
              "delivery": "没话找话"
            },
            {
              "speaker": "C03",
              "line": "走了四十年,没有走不完的河。",
              "delivery": "篙声不停"
            },
            {
              "speaker": "C04",
              "line": "这位先生面生得很,也是去县城?",
              "delivery": "转头找新话头"
            },
            {
              "action": "陆行远点了点头,眼睛却看着舱外的雾,没接这个话头。"
            },
            {
              "speaker": "C04",
              "line": "得,一船的闷葫芦,就我一个人长嘴。",
              "delivery": "自讨没趣"
            },
            {
              "action": "老周在船头笑了一声,没回头。水声在船底一下一下,像谁在数着到岸的时辰。"
            },
            {
              "action": "陆行远从头到尾没看这场热闹,可他口袋里的右手,攥紧了一下。"
            },
            {
              "speaker": "C02",
              "line": "这条河,今晚怕是不太平。",
              "delivery": "低声,几乎自语"
            },
            {
              "action": "汽笛在雾深处闷闷响了一声,没人接话。"
            },
            {
              "speaker": "VO",
              "line": "谁都别碰它。到了县城,它就是我全部的话。",
              "delivery": "沈知微的心声,冷"
            },
            {
              "action": "雾从舱口漫进来,皮箱上的铜扣绿锈在昏光里一闪。栈桥的灯缩成一粒黄豆,灭了。"
            }
          ]
        }
      ],
      "hookBeat": [
        1,
        1
      ]
    },
    {
      "ep": 2,
      "targetSeconds": 120,
      "hook": "陆行远为什么替一桩旧案说话",
      "cliff": "胡二爷讲见闻时,指名道姓提了沈家",
      "beatsClaimed": [],
      "scenes": [
        {
          "sceneId": "S01",
          "lighting": "晨雾",
          "characters": [
            "C01",
            "C02",
            "C04"
          ],
          "props": [
            "P01"
          ],
          "flow": [
            {
              "action": "冷开场:船身猛一晃,陆行远的右手在大衣口袋里攥紧了什么,眼睛始终盯着雾外。船进了河心的雾档,胡二爷从货担里摸出一包炒豆,挨个让。"
            },
            {
              "speaker": "C04",
              "line": "尝尝?县城东街炒的,隔着雾都香。",
              "delivery": "殷勤"
            },
            {
              "action": "沈知微摇头。陆行远像没听见。胡二爷自己嚼上了,越嚼话越多。"
            },
            {
              "speaker": "C04",
              "line": "这趟进城你们可赶巧了,集市比年根还热闹。",
              "delivery": "眉飞色舞"
            },
            {
              "speaker": "C04",
              "line": "为啥?县衙在翻一桩十年前的旧案,全城都在看戏。",
              "delivery": "压低声音卖关子"
            },
            {
              "action": "他说着话,眼睛却直往沈知微怀里的皮箱看。"
            },
            {
              "action": "沈知微把箱子抱得更紧,头垂得更低。"
            },
            {
              "speaker": "C04",
              "line": "听说当年错杀了人,如今苦主的后人要翻案。",
              "delivery": "咂着嘴"
            },
            {
              "speaker": "C04",
              "line": "沈家啊——城里老户,说没就没了大半门。",
              "delivery": "叹一声,眼却瞟着皮箱"
            },
            {
              "action": "沈字一出口,舱里静了一瞬。沈知微垂着头,肩膀绷紧了。"
            },
            {
              "speaker": "C02",
              "line": "那案子,查错了人。",
              "delivery": "突然开口"
            },
            {
              "action": "满舱静了。胡二爷嚼豆的嘴停在半空。"
            },
            {
              "speaker": "C04",
              "line": "哟,先生知道内情?",
              "delivery": "眯起眼"
            },
            {
              "speaker": "C02",
              "line": "卷宗我读过。人证是屈打成招,物证对不上。",
              "delivery": "语气平得像念书"
            },
            {
              "speaker": "C04",
              "line": "卷宗那是衙门里的东西,先生贵姓?",
              "delivery": "笑里藏针"
            },
            {
              "action": "陆行远不答。右手在大衣口袋里,轻轻动了一下。"
            },
            {
              "speaker": "C02",
              "line": "姓什么不要紧。要紧的是错案就是错案。",
              "delivery": "不接招"
            },
            {
              "action": "沈知微抬起头,第一次正眼看向这个沉默的男人。"
            },
            {
              "speaker": "VO",
              "line": "他是谁?他为什么替沈家说话?",
              "delivery": "沈知微的心声"
            },
            {
              "speaker": "C04",
              "line": "姑娘也姓沈?我瞧你上船就没说过几句话。",
              "delivery": "冷不丁转向她"
            },
            {
              "speaker": "C01",
              "line": "出门人,姓什么都是过客。",
              "delivery": "平静得过了头"
            },
            {
              "speaker": "C04",
              "line": "好好好,是二爷我多问。",
              "delivery": "拍腿笑"
            },
            {
              "action": "他笑着,身子却往沈知微那边又挪了半条凳。"
            },
            {
              "speaker": "C02",
              "line": "胡老板,你的豆撒了。",
              "delivery": "淡淡地"
            },
            {
              "action": "胡二爷低头去捡豆,挪过去的半条凳又缩了回来。"
            },
            {
              "speaker": "C04",
              "line": "邪性,今儿这船上人人都护着人人。",
              "delivery": "捡着豆嘟囔"
            },
            {
              "action": "篙声从船头传来,一下,又一下,稳得让人心慌。"
            },
            {
              "speaker": "C04",
              "line": "你们说句公道话,那旧案到底冤不冤?",
              "delivery": "不死心"
            },
            {
              "action": "没人回答,只有篙点进水里的闷响。"
            },
            {
              "speaker": "C04",
              "line": "得,问了也白问——这船上的规矩,不问来路。",
              "delivery": "自己接上"
            },
            {
              "speaker": "C02",
              "line": "也不问去处。",
              "delivery": "低声补了半句"
            },
            {
              "action": "陆行远说完这四个字,目光落回舱外。雾里隐约有另一条船的影子,一晃就没了。"
            },
            {
              "speaker": "VO",
              "line": "一个护箱的,一个懂案的,这船有意思了。",
              "delivery": "胡二爷的心声,算盘声"
            },
            {
              "action": "沈知微顺着他的目光看向雾里,什么都没看见,抱箱的手又紧了紧。"
            }
          ]
        }
      ],
      "hookBeat": [
        1,
        1
      ]
    },
    {
      "ep": 3,
      "targetSeconds": 120,
      "hook": "县衙的砚台为什么在他身上",
      "cliff": "巡查船的汽笛越来越近,老周却把船往雾更深处撑",
      "beatsClaimed": [
        "身份揭破"
      ],
      "scenes": [
        {
          "sceneId": "S01",
          "lighting": "晨雾",
          "characters": [
            "C01",
            "C02",
            "C03",
            "C04"
          ],
          "props": [
            "P01",
            "P02"
          ],
          "flow": [
            {
              "action": "冷开场:一声汽笛从雾里剜出来,陆行远的手猛地按住大衣口袋——那里鼓着一块方硬的轮廓。满舱的人都直了背。"
            },
            {
              "speaker": "C04",
              "line": "听听,这动静——巡查的船。",
              "delivery": "竖起耳朵"
            },
            {
              "speaker": "C03",
              "line": "商船改的巡查船,烧的煤不一样,听声就知道。",
              "delivery": "从船头,声音没起伏"
            },
            {
              "action": "老周说着,篙却往雾更深的地方点。船身一偏,离了主航道。"
            },
            {
              "speaker": "C04",
              "line": "老周哥这是躲啊?咱船上又没人揣着硬家伙。",
              "delivery": "嗓门故意抬高"
            },
            {
              "action": "舱里一下没了声。胡二爷笑着,眼睛盯住了陆行远的大衣口袋。"
            },
            {
              "speaker": "C04",
              "line": "先生,你说是不是?这年头查得严,说不清可就麻烦了。",
              "delivery": "步步紧逼"
            },
            {
              "action": "满舱的目光跟着聚过去。那只从上船就没露过面的右手,正揣在口袋里。"
            },
            {
              "action": "沈知微也在看。她自己抱着箱子,最懂被人盯着的滋味,可她还是看了。"
            },
            {
              "speaker": "C03",
              "line": "胡二爷,船上的规矩。",
              "delivery": "声音沉了下来"
            },
            {
              "speaker": "C04",
              "line": "规矩是不问来路——可没说不问口袋。汽笛在催了。",
              "delivery": "摊着手"
            },
            {
              "action": "汽笛又是一声,近得能听出船头破水的哗声。"
            },
            {
              "speaker": "C02",
              "line": "好。",
              "delivery": "很轻地笑了一下"
            },
            {
              "action": "陆行远站起身。右手从口袋里抽出来的那一瞬,半船人屏住了呼吸。"
            },
            {
              "action": "摊开的手心里没有枪。是一方旧砚,砚身乌沉,边角磕出了茬口。"
            },
            {
              "speaker": "C04",
              "line": "砚台?先生你揣块砚台过河?",
              "delivery": "愣住"
            },
            {
              "speaker": "C02",
              "line": "物归原主。就这四个字,多的没有。",
              "delivery": "把砚举到光下"
            },
            {
              "action": "他把砚翻过来。砚底一方刻印,在昏光里露出笔画——县衙的印。"
            },
            {
              "speaker": "VO",
              "line": "县衙的东西,在一个不肯报姓的人手里。",
              "delivery": "胡二爷的心声"
            },
            {
              "speaker": "C01",
              "line": "这砚……是县衙大堂的?",
              "delivery": "声音发紧"
            },
            {
              "speaker": "C02",
              "line": "姑娘认得?",
              "delivery": "看她一眼"
            },
            {
              "action": "沈知微抱紧箱子别开脸,像是刚才那句话不是她问的。"
            },
            {
              "speaker": "C04",
              "line": "认不认得不打紧,打紧的是巡查船来了怎么说。",
              "delivery": "打圆场,眼神却亮了"
            },
            {
              "speaker": "C03",
              "line": "说什么?一船过客,一块石头。",
              "delivery": "篙不停"
            },
            {
              "action": "老周把船撑进更浓的雾里,贴着芦苇的影子走。汽笛声从船尾远去。"
            },
            {
              "action": "满舱人不约而同松了口气,又不约而同互相看了一眼——谁也没资格笑话谁。"
            },
            {
              "speaker": "C04",
              "line": "邪门,二爷我走这条河十几年,头回盼着雾再大点。",
              "delivery": "抹了把汗"
            },
            {
              "speaker": "C02",
              "line": "雾大,才好赶路。",
              "delivery": "收砚入袋"
            },
            {
              "speaker": "C04",
              "line": "先生这砚少说值些银子,就不怕船上有黑手?",
              "delivery": "贼心不死"
            },
            {
              "speaker": "C02",
              "line": "值钱的不是砚,是砚底那方印。",
              "delivery": "看都不看他"
            },
            {
              "speaker": "C04",
              "line": "那更得小心——有人连印带命一起收。",
              "delivery": "嘿嘿一笑"
            },
            {
              "action": "这话说完,舱里又静了。胡二爷自己也觉出说过了头,讪讪去摸他的炒豆。"
            },
            {
              "speaker": "C03",
              "line": "到岸之前,都是船客。到了岸,各归各命。",
              "delivery": "慢悠悠,像说给全船听"
            },
            {
              "action": "陆行远坐回舱壁边,右手又揣回口袋。只是这一次,没人再觉得那里藏着凶器。"
            },
            {
              "speaker": "VO",
              "line": "县衙的砚,冤案的年份——他是来送东西的,还是来找人的?",
              "delivery": "沈知微的心声"
            },
            {
              "action": "船在雾里继续往前走,四下只剩水声。"
            }
          ]
        }
      ],
      "hookBeat": [
        1,
        1
      ]
    },
    {
      "ep": 4,
      "targetSeconds": 120,
      "hook": "冤案两个字为什么让她瞬间失态",
      "cliff": "老周在船头咳了一声,像是提醒,又像是警告",
      "beatsClaimed": [],
      "scenes": [
        {
          "sceneId": "S01",
          "lighting": "晨雾",
          "characters": [
            "C01",
            "C02",
            "C04"
          ],
          "props": [
            "P01",
            "P02"
          ],
          "flow": [
            {
              "action": "冷开场一闪:沈知微抱箱的手臂猛地收紧,指节又白了一层。汽笛声擦着船尾远去,雾里只剩水声,舱里没有一个人放松下来。"
            },
            {
              "speaker": "C04",
              "line": "先生,二爷我嘴碎,可眼不瞎——你那砚,来路不一般。",
              "delivery": "压低嗓门"
            },
            {
              "action": "陆行远沉默片刻。开口时,声音压得只有舱内三个人听得见。"
            },
            {
              "speaker": "C02",
              "line": "十年前县衙断过一桩案,断错了。",
              "delivery": "一字一顿"
            },
            {
              "speaker": "C02",
              "line": "主审的师爷收了这方砚,案子就歪了。",
              "delivery": "手按着口袋"
            },
            {
              "action": "沈知微把箱子抱得更紧了。"
            },
            {
              "speaker": "C02",
              "line": "师爷临终托我把砚送回去。冤案的首尾,总要有人来了。",
              "delivery": "平静,却压着分量"
            },
            {
              "speaker": "C04",
              "line": "送回去?衙门的东西送回衙门,那不是自投罗网?",
              "delivery": "咂舌"
            },
            {
              "speaker": "C02",
              "line": "砚不回去,案翻不动。",
              "delivery": "只有这一句"
            },
            {
              "action": "冤案两个字第二次出口的时候,沈知微的指节又掐白了。"
            },
            {
              "speaker": "C04",
              "line": "姑娘?姑娘你脸色不对。",
              "delivery": "眼尖"
            },
            {
              "speaker": "C01",
              "line": "舱里闷,没事。",
              "delivery": "声音绷着"
            },
            {
              "action": "她说没事,人却往角落的阴影里缩了缩,把箱子搂在身前。"
            },
            {
              "action": "胡二爷看看她,又看看陆行远,脸上的笑淡了下来。"
            },
            {
              "speaker": "C04",
              "line": "二爷我见天琢磨人心。可有的心,琢磨着琢磨着就不忍了。",
              "delivery": "笑容淡了"
            },
            {
              "speaker": "C02",
              "line": "不忍,就别琢磨。",
              "delivery": "接得很快"
            },
            {
              "speaker": "C04",
              "line": "做不到啊先生。这一船的心事,比我一担子的货还沉。",
              "delivery": "摆手苦笑"
            },
            {
              "action": "船头传来一声咳。不重,却让舱里三个人同时停了话头。"
            },
            {
              "speaker": "C04",
              "line": "听见没?老周哥这一嗓子,是提醒咱们雾里有耳朵。",
              "delivery": "压得更低"
            },
            {
              "speaker": "C02",
              "line": "也可能是警告——别把到不了岸的话说出口。",
              "delivery": "摇头"
            },
            {
              "action": "沈知微在阴影里抬眼,飞快地看了陆行远一眼,又垂下去。"
            },
            {
              "speaker": "VO",
              "line": "他说的那桩案,年份对得上。可我不能问,一问就全露了。",
              "delivery": "沈知微的心声"
            },
            {
              "action": "胡二爷把货担往里挪了挪,给沈知微让出半条凳的空,什么也没说。"
            },
            {
              "action": "让完地方,他自己愣了一下,挠了挠头。"
            },
            {
              "speaker": "C04",
              "line": "凳子硌得慌,二爷我换个坐处。",
              "delivery": "给自己找补"
            },
            {
              "action": "没人拆穿他。船身在雾里轻轻晃。"
            },
            {
              "speaker": "C02",
              "line": "雾要到晌午才散。散之前,各自把话想清楚。",
              "delivery": "望着舱外"
            },
            {
              "speaker": "C01",
              "line": "先生方才说,砚不回去,案翻不动。",
              "delivery": "忽然开口"
            },
            {
              "speaker": "C01",
              "line": "那要是……有人连状纸都备好了呢?",
              "delivery": "轻得像自言自语"
            },
            {
              "action": "陆行远猛地转头,第一次正眼看她。"
            },
            {
              "action": "两人对视了一眼,谁都没有再问。"
            },
            {
              "speaker": "VO",
              "line": "状纸?好家伙,这船上没有一个人是过客。",
              "delivery": "胡二爷的心声"
            }
          ]
        }
      ],
      "hookBeat": [
        1,
        1
      ]
    },
    {
      "ep": 5,
      "targetSeconds": 120,
      "hook": "老周怎么会知道她要投奔谁",
      "cliff": "胡二爷听到沈姓接应四个字,笑容第一次挂不住",
      "beatsClaimed": [
        "反转"
      ],
      "scenes": [
        {
          "sceneId": "S03",
          "lighting": "薄雾午前",
          "characters": [
            "C01",
            "C03"
          ],
          "props": [
            "P01"
          ],
          "flow": [
            {
              "action": "冷开场:撑了四十年篙、从不开口问客的船夫收住篙,转头看向船舷边的沈知微,嘴唇动了。薄雾的午前,对岸芦苇滩第一次露出轮廓,像一道灰绿的堤。"
            },
            {
              "action": "沈知微不知何时到了船舷边,抱着箱子,望着那道越来越近的岸线出神。"
            },
            {
              "speaker": "C03",
              "line": "姑娘,到了岸,往哪儿去?",
              "delivery": "身后,忽然"
            },
            {
              "action": "四十年不问来路的船夫,头一回开了口。沈知微的背僵住了。"
            },
            {
              "speaker": "C01",
              "line": "北门外,投亲。",
              "delivery": "稳住声音"
            },
            {
              "speaker": "C03",
              "line": "投谁?",
              "delivery": "篙没停"
            },
            {
              "speaker": "C01",
              "line": "……姓沈的本家。",
              "delivery": "指节收紧"
            },
            {
              "action": "老周撑篙的手没停,船擦着芦苇缓缓地走,惊起两只水鸟。"
            },
            {
              "speaker": "C03",
              "line": "县城北门外,早就没有姓沈的接应了。",
              "delivery": "声音很平"
            },
            {
              "action": "沈知微猛地回头。"
            },
            {
              "speaker": "C01",
              "line": "你说什么?",
              "delivery": "声音变了"
            },
            {
              "speaker": "C03",
              "line": "三年前就走绝了。走的走,没的没。姑娘,你投的是空门。",
              "delivery": "不看她"
            },
            {
              "action": "风从芦苇滩那边吹过来,她抱着箱子站在船舷边,一动不动。"
            },
            {
              "speaker": "C01",
              "line": "你怎么知道我要投谁?你到底是谁?",
              "delivery": "逼近一步"
            },
            {
              "speaker": "C03",
              "line": "我就是个摆渡的。四十年,什么人没渡过。",
              "delivery": "撑篙,望着河面"
            },
            {
              "action": "他顿了顿,篙尖从水里提起来,滴着水。"
            },
            {
              "speaker": "C03",
              "line": "渡过去的人多了,回来的少。回来的里头,有人说过沈家的事。",
              "delivery": "像在说别人的故事"
            },
            {
              "action": "说完这句,老周不再开口,一篙一篙,照旧撑船。"
            }
          ]
        },
        {
          "sceneId": "S01",
          "lighting": "晨雾",
          "characters": [
            "C01",
            "C04"
          ],
          "props": [
            "P01"
          ],
          "flow": [
            {
              "action": "沈知微抱着箱子回到舱里,脚步发飘,在角落坐下。"
            },
            {
              "speaker": "C04",
              "line": "姑娘,喝口水。脸白成这样,可不像晕船。",
              "delivery": "递过水囊"
            },
            {
              "speaker": "C01",
              "line": "不用。",
              "delivery": "机械地摇头"
            },
            {
              "speaker": "C04",
              "line": "方才船头的话,二爷我隔着舱板,听见了几个字。",
              "delivery": "收回水囊,状似无意"
            },
            {
              "action": "沈知微猛地抬头。胡二爷的笑还挂在脸上,手却停在了半空。"
            },
            {
              "speaker": "C04",
              "line": "沈姓、接应——就这四个字。",
              "delivery": "说得很慢"
            },
            {
              "action": "说出这四个字,他脸上的笑挂不住了。"
            },
            {
              "speaker": "C01",
              "line": "胡老板听见了,打算怎么样?",
              "delivery": "盯着他"
            },
            {
              "speaker": "C04",
              "line": "不怎么样。二爷我就是忽然想起来,我也有对不住沈家的地方。",
              "delivery": "半晌,苦笑"
            },
            {
              "action": "他说完就去理货担,理了半天,一件货也没理出来。"
            },
            {
              "speaker": "C04",
              "line": "当年沈家出事,满城看热闹的人里,有二爷我一个。",
              "delivery": "背对着她,忽然"
            },
            {
              "speaker": "C04",
              "line": "看了,没说话。这就是对不住。",
              "delivery": "声音哑了半度"
            },
            {
              "speaker": "C01",
              "line": "说话的人,后来都怎么样了?",
              "delivery": "轻声"
            },
            {
              "speaker": "C04",
              "line": "没有说话的人。一个都没有。",
              "delivery": "半天才答"
            },
            {
              "action": "舱里静得能听见雾珠子从篷顶滴下来的声音。"
            },
            {
              "speaker": "VO",
              "line": "接应没了,路断了。可这箱子,拼了命也得送进县城。",
              "delivery": "沈知微的心声"
            },
            {
              "speaker": "VO",
              "line": "满城没有一个人说话。所以状纸只能我自己送。",
              "delivery": "沈知微的心声,一字一钉"
            },
            {
              "action": "舱外的芦苇影子从船舷滑过去,岸越来越近,雾越来越薄。"
            }
          ]
        }
      ],
      "hookBeat": [
        1,
        1
      ]
    },
    {
      "ep": 6,
      "targetSeconds": 120,
      "hook": "状纸和旧砚拼出的到底是谁的冤案",
      "cliff": "胡二爷这个身份是真交底,还是又一层伪装",
      "beatsClaimed": [
        "收束"
      ],
      "scenes": [
        {
          "sceneId": "S01",
          "lighting": "雾散近岸",
          "characters": [
            "C01",
            "C02",
            "C03",
            "C04"
          ],
          "props": [
            "P01",
            "P02"
          ],
          "flow": [
            {
              "action": "冷开场特写:皮箱铜扣被一根拇指推开的一瞬。雾开始散了,舱里第一次照进真正的天光,每个人脸上的影子都藏不住了。"
            },
            {
              "speaker": "C03",
              "line": "前头就是渡口,一炷香靠岸。",
              "delivery": "从船头"
            },
            {
              "action": "沈知微站起来。她把皮箱放在舱板正中,当着所有人,打开了铜扣。"
            },
            {
              "action": "没有金银。一摞压得整整齐齐的状纸,状纸上头,一方小小的灵位。"
            },
            {
              "speaker": "C04",
              "line": "状纸……姑娘,你这是要去翻案?",
              "delivery": "倒吸一口气"
            },
            {
              "speaker": "C01",
              "line": "十年前的沈家案。人证物证,我收了十年。",
              "delivery": "声音不大,字字清楚"
            },
            {
              "action": "陆行远走过来,从大衣口袋里取出那方旧砚,轻轻放在状纸上面。"
            },
            {
              "speaker": "C02",
              "line": "砚归原案。证物齐了。",
              "delivery": "像落下一枚棋子"
            },
            {
              "action": "砚底的刻印和状纸上的案号摆在一起,正好对上。"
            },
            {
              "speaker": "C04",
              "line": "这位是……?",
              "delivery": "指着灵位,声音小了"
            },
            {
              "speaker": "C01",
              "line": "我爹。当年顶罪的人。",
              "delivery": "平静得吓人"
            },
            {
              "action": "舱里没人再说话,只有水声从船底流过。"
            },
            {
              "speaker": "C01",
              "line": "你早知道我是谁。",
              "delivery": "看着陆行远"
            },
            {
              "speaker": "C02",
              "line": "船到河心就猜到了。雾里认不出脸,认得出十年不肯放手的人。",
              "delivery": "把话说开了"
            },
            {
              "action": "胡二爷盯着那摞状纸看了很久,忽然长长叹了一口气。"
            },
            {
              "speaker": "C04",
              "line": "得,二爷我也交个底。",
              "delivery": "把货担一放"
            },
            {
              "speaker": "C04",
              "line": "我在县衙当差,管的就是案牍。这趟出来,本是盯着这条水路。",
              "delivery": "说得又快又狠"
            },
            {
              "action": "满舱一静。老周的篙声都停了半拍。"
            },
            {
              "speaker": "C01",
              "line": "盯谁?",
              "delivery": "后退半步"
            },
            {
              "speaker": "C04",
              "line": "盯一个可能带着旧案证物过河的人。可盯了一路,我改主意了。",
              "delivery": "苦笑"
            },
            {
              "speaker": "C04",
              "line": "北门进不去,我领你们走侧门。案牍房的门,我熟。",
              "delivery": "一拍胸口"
            },
            {
              "speaker": "C03",
              "line": "都定了?定了就把话收好——岸上人多。",
              "delivery": "忽然从船头开口"
            },
            {
              "action": "这是老周在船上说的最后一句话。天光照在摊开的状纸上。"
            },
            {
              "speaker": "VO",
              "line": "一船的伪装,到了岸倒都成了同路人。",
              "delivery": "陆行远的心声"
            }
          ]
        },
        {
          "sceneId": "S02",
          "characters": [
            "C01",
            "C02",
            "C03",
            "C04",
            "C05"
          ],
          "props": [
            "P01"
          ],
          "flow": [
            {
              "action": "船帮碰上栈桥的旧木,闷闷一声。岸上的更夫挑着灯笼站在桥头,梆子别在腰里。"
            },
            {
              "speaker": "C05",
              "line": "渡船靠岸——雾散了,各走各路喽。",
              "delivery": "扬声报岸"
            },
            {
              "action": "更夫凑近了打量三人,灯笼抬了抬,又什么都没问地放下了。"
            },
            {
              "speaker": "C05",
              "line": "城门口新添了岗,几位走西巷绕一绕稳当。",
              "delivery": "压低声,像随口一提"
            },
            {
              "speaker": "C04",
              "line": "老哥懂行。",
              "delivery": "笑着拱手"
            },
            {
              "action": "沈知微抱着重新合上的皮箱,第一个踏上跳板。这一次,指节没有发白。"
            },
            {
              "speaker": "C02",
              "line": "走吧。状纸在,路就在。",
              "delivery": "在她身后"
            },
            {
              "action": "胡二爷挑起货担跟上,走两步又回头,朝船头拱了拱手。"
            },
            {
              "speaker": "C04",
              "line": "老周哥,回见。",
              "delivery": "难得正经"
            },
            {
              "speaker": "C03",
              "line": "河上不说回见。要过河,我都在。",
              "delivery": "撑篙调头,头也不回"
            },
            {
              "action": "三个人的影子一前一后进了城门方向的路。更夫的灯笼在他们身后晃了晃,梆子敲了两下。"
            },
            {
              "speaker": "C05",
              "line": "这一船渡的,怕不只是人。",
              "delivery": "望着背影,自语"
            },
            {
              "action": "老周把船撑回河心。雾散后的渡口空空荡荡,只剩栈桥上一串湿脚印,朝着县城。"
            }
          ]
        }
      ],
      "hookBeat": [
        1,
        1
      ]
    }
  ]
}